B.reuschling h da main patch 55004

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content/rooms/create.en.md

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 New rooms are created using the + in the left bar in the category Rooms.
 
 ![Marking of the room add button](/images/01_Rooms_en.png)
-Then the room name must be assigned. You can also optionally assign a theme (which can be adapted more often later). Optionally, the room can be made publicly accessible (this is not the default setting). With an additional click on "Show more settings" it can be prevented that Matrix users from outside the Darmstadt University of Applied Sciences home server (Homeserver) can enter the room. By default, all new rooms (just like all new 1:1 calls) have [end-to-end encryption]({{< relref "encryption" >}}) set up. If this is not desired (e.g. because verification of the participants becomes very impractical in very large rooms) you can use the slider BEFORE creating the room to not activate end-to-end encryption. Similar if you want to create public rooms (this rooms can be entered by everyone). BEFORE creating public rooms, you should deactivate the end-to-end encryption.
+Then the room name must be assigned. You can also optionally assign a theme (which can be adapted more often later). Optionally, the room can be made publicly accessible (this is not the default setting). With an additional click on "Show more settings" it can be prevented that Matrix users from outside the Darmstadt University of Applied Sciences home server (Homeserver) can enter the room. By default, all new rooms (just like all new 1:1 calls) have [end-to-end encryption]({{< relref "encryption" >}}) set up. If this is not desired (e.g. because verification of the participants becomes very impractical in very large rooms) you can use the slider BEFORE creating the room to not activate end-to-end encryption. Similarly, if you want to create public rooms (these rooms can be entered by everyone). BEFORE creating public rooms, you should deactivate the end-to-end encryption.
 
 {{% notice note %}}
 The end-to-end encryption of large or public spaces is critical in terms of the difficult verification for many people. See [Use end-to-end encryption]({{< relref "encryption" >}}).
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ A once activated end-to-end encryption could not be rolled back!
 
 ![Input menu for the room name](/images/02_Rooms_en.png)
 
-The room is now created and gets any colored icon color. By clicking on the 'i' in the upper right corner and then the gear wheel "room settings" you can access exactly those room settings:
+The room is created now  and gets any colored icon color assigned. By clicking on the 'i' in the upper right corner followed by the gear wheel "room settings" you can access exactly those room settings:
 
 ![Marking of the room settings button for the newly created room](/images/03_Rooms_en.png)
 
@@ -42,12 +42,12 @@ In the **Security & Privacy** tab, room administrators have to make important de
 
 1. "Only people who have been invited": These are closed rooms. Access at the moment only by explicit invitation by moderator:inside or administrator:inside
 2. "Everyone who knows the room link (except guests)": This is a public room, but you can only read it if you enter it (and thus become visible to all room members). Here you can see exactly who is in the room and when, and if necessary you can kick and ban people who should not be in the room...
-3. "Everyone who knows the room link (including guests)": This is a public room, and everyone can read it. All over the world. And room members will never know who read it and when. So this is like a website where everyone can take notes. This setting often goes along with the option that "everyone" can read the chat history.
+3. "Everyone who knows the room link (including guests)": This is a public room, and everyone can read it, all over the world. Room members will never know who read it and when. This is like a website where everyone can take notes. This setting often goes along with the option that "everyone" can read the chat history.
 
-A "call waiting" to closed rooms is not yet possible. The closest workaround is to send a direct message to the room administrator, who will then invite you.
+A "call waiting" to closed rooms is not yet possible. The closest workaround is to send a direct message to the room administrator who will invite you then.
 
 {{% notice warning %}}
-As the room administrator, you have **responsibility** for the content shared in the room (e.g. false messages, hate mail, etc.). Include other people in this responsibility by assigning roles in the right bar (after clicking on the person icon) via the "Permission Level" drop-down menu, e.g. Administrator:inside or Moderator:inside.
+As the room administrator, you have **responsibility** for the content shared in the room (e.g. false messages, hate mail, etc). Include other people in this responsibility by assigning roles in the right bar (after clicking on the person icon) via the "Permission Level" drop-down menu, e.g. Administrator:inside or Moderator:inside.
 {{% /notice %}}
 
 ![Drop-down menu for the assignment of rights for room participants (image row 1)](/images/06_Users-Permissions_en.png)