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content/clients/desktop.en.md

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 ![Change login page with focus on the homeserver button](/images/02_Change-Homeserver_en.png)
 
-Now you can manually specify the home server: https://matrix.fbi.h-da.de
+Manually specify the following home server: https://matrix.fbi.h-da.de
 
 ![Input field to change the home server with the input matrix.fbi.h-da.de](/images/03_Set-Homeserver_en.png)
 
-Afterwards the one-time login with h-da login and h-da password must be carried out:
+Afterwards, carry out the one-time login with h-da login and password:
 
 ![Login window with request to enter h-da login and password](/images/04_Username_en.png)
 
-By activating the slider under "All Settings > Settings" > **Automatic start after system login**, the element client starts after every reboot and you no longer miss any notifications.
+Activate the slider under "All Settings > Settings" > **Automatic start after system login**, to let the Element client start after every reboot and no longer miss any notifications.
 
 ![settings marked with the dot start automatically after system startup](/images/05_Settings_en.png)