From 8838e61219a7732aa19c307a333465258630d62b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Benedict Reuschling <benedict.reuschling@h-da.de>
Date: Mon, 8 Mar 2021 10:40:01 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Use active voice and capitalize Elements and Matrix.
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content/clients/browser.en.md | 16 ++++++++--------
1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
diff --git a/content/clients/browser.en.md b/content/clients/browser.en.md
index 52e4573..5408856 100644
--- a/content/clients/browser.en.md
+++ b/content/clients/browser.en.md
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ Start here: [https://chat.fbi.h-da.de](https://chat.fbi.h-da.de)
-No registration is necessary, the service can be used immediately by clicking on "Sign in" on the homepage [**https://chat.fbi.h-da.de**](https://chat.fbi.h-da.de).
+No registration is necessary, the service works immediately by clicking on "Sign in" on the homepage [**https://chat.fbi.h-da.de**](https://chat.fbi.h-da.de).
@@ -25,12 +25,12 @@ An alternative login, e.g. using the e-mail address, is *NOT* possible during th
After the first login there is also no e-mail / confirmation mail.
-Analogous to e-mail addresses, this results in matrix addresses with the following structure:
+Analogous to e-mail addresses, this results in Matrix addresses with the following structure:
@University-Login:matrix.fbi.h-da.de
{{% notice warning %}}
-If you want to start immediately with the common available [Matrix Client](https://app.element.io/#/login) instead of the above mentioned website (Element Web-App installed at Darmstadt University of Applied Sciences), it is important to change the home server from the usually default matrix.org to matrix.fbi.h-da.de (shown in the following three screenshots)
+If you want to start immediately with the common available [Matrix Client](https://app.element.io/#/login) instead of the above mentioned website (Element Web-App installed at Darmstadt University of Applied Sciences), it is important to change the home server from the default matrix.org to matrix.fbi.h-da.de (shown in the following three screenshots)
{{% /notice %}}
@@ -39,19 +39,19 @@ If you want to start immediately with the common available [Matrix Client](https
-2. Entry of the matrix home server address of the Darmstadt University of Applied Sciences
+2. Enter the matrix home server address of the Darmstadt University of Applied Sciences
-3. After clicking "Continue" you fill in your credentials analogur the description for the element chat client in chapter "First Steps".
+3. Click "Continue" to fill in theyour credentials fitting the description for the Element chat client in chapter "First Steps".
## Browser settings
### Browser selection
-Recommended are the browsers [Firefox](https://www.mozilla.org/de/firefox/new/), [Chromium](https://www.chromium.org/getting-involved/download-chromium), newer versions of MS Edge (based on Chromium). Older or unsuitable browsers may only show a white page.
+Recommend browsers are [Firefox](https://www.mozilla.org/de/firefox/new/), [Chromium](https://www.chromium.org/getting-involved/download-chromium), and newer versions of MS Edge (based on Chromium). Older or unsuitable browsers may only show a white page.
### NoScript
-Many people use script blockers to protect themselves from Tracking and malware in the browser, for example with the addon [NoScript](https://addons.mozilla.org/de/firefox/addon/noscript/). Here you have to make the following settings (for the integration manager, e.g. Jitsi/Etherpad)
+Many people use script blockers to protect themselves from tracking and malware in the browser, i.e. with [NoScript](https://addons.mozilla.org/de/firefox/addon/noscript/). Change the following settings (for the integration manager, e.g. Jitsi/Etherpad)
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ Source: TU Dresden
### Cookies
-Do you also allow cookies from
+Also, allow cookies from
- h-da.de
- vector.im (for the integration manager)
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